Wednesday, October 1, 2008

**** Heartthrob Comments

Rating: 4.5

The Oak of Lancashire emits color
Of your hair, light as Tulips on Titicaca Lake
Brown as chestnut of Hunstanton
Silken as Tianjin silk
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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Exasperation 22 December 2019

It's a hundred over 10.

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Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) 02 February 2009

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS POEM! ! ! ! U R AN AMAZING WRITER! ! ! I AM VERY INSPIRED

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Krisdale Talidong 12 December 2008

I LOVE IT! ! ! ! ! ! You are really a great writer! !

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Triin Kann 22 October 2008

I like the ending :) Such a great poem... as always

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Zandi Mantho Koveya 20 October 2008

A NICE POEM INDEED, YOU ARE A GOOD WRITER, KEEP IT UP AND GOD BLESS..! ! !

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John Lambremont, Sr. 14 October 2008

As well consructed as the beauty it depicts. A bit overloaded with goegrraphic references. The end of the first verse a bit too obscure. Fine write, very entertaining, held my interest throughout.

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Ozzy Govea 13 October 2008

You can imagine everything you wrote, and I believe you can only do that with good poetry, great job!

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I cannot wait until i become as good as u..i love it

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Richard Prosper 10 October 2008

This poem reflects someone who is well traveled and seasoned in writing. If I could describe a woman as lovely as you have, I should think I would showcase my talent also. Great write!

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Hercolena Oliver 10 October 2008

Excitably thought provoking.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 09 October 2008

You have flaunted your skill or passion when you wrote this poem describing the beauty of the woman.

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Tarapada Mohapatra 08 October 2008

Just terrific! ! Thank you.

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Empress Ina Spirit Mavuso 08 October 2008

I respect people who are able to embrace beauty in a natural way. This is beautiful.

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Bev Hemopo 08 October 2008

Fantastic lyrics...If only the Countryside could talk They would tell you.. Thank you for appreciating our existance... Cheers....Bev

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Jazmyne Teague 07 October 2008

hey thats really really pretty! !

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Kerri King 07 October 2008

What you speak of is just great! i love reading your work. Keep it up!

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Whisperkwane Lamb 07 October 2008

well my good friend you are truely an English poet...and i love you for it...word are not easy to come by...today

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Mimzy Sue 07 October 2008

you are indeed a true poet, your works are amazing. i'd say more than 10

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Darlyn Rose Villarosa 07 October 2008

i love the way you wrote your poem.... i hope someday i could write like that... i have a few words to describe how i feel and write it down in a piece of paper... but you have the perfect words to put in your poem and it is wonderful... have a lot of poems to share to everyone....

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Malini Kadir 07 October 2008

Fascinating piece of work..........

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