Wednesday, July 25, 2012

Heartsong Comments

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It was the last of summer
when joyous you came to me;
As evenings cooled
and russet autumn hues began to show..
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Jinge Norvall
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Deo Inji 03 August 2012

I like how you used the three seasons, and associating the natural feelings that come with them. The 'Heartsong', appears at the last of summer, when autumn begins to set in the mood for the 'Heartsong' beautifully...dancing with the lingering fun that summer just left. And then the bitter winter brings its harsh coldness, depicting loneliness & longing. Beautifully written.

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