Hearts Tongue Comments
Today is dark but tomorrow,
Lots of suns and stars
Will bring the light and sweep the sorrow
If and if
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A beautiful love poem, with an equally beautiful picture of a dew-drenched rose bud. 'Make a safe cozy nest, For my fevered heart and body In your heart, on your velvet chest' - loved these lines.
Today has no light in this heart but this is alive like flowers fragrance as the Unseen spirit in every existence Time is unstoppable power of life Tomorrow will come as today maybe the light will come with the tomorrow where the heart will get the eternity and the eternal spirit always removes the darkness those come to its womb and then the heart can speak the ultimate power of life
Let our hearts talk through the eyes, While the lips are closed Hearts are familiar like birds in the skies..yes, let the inside heart talk with our every limb as the powerful commander which will be expressed as the true knowing self; beautiful poem penned; congrats for being selected again as POD
How nicely articulated! ! A sweet song straight from the heart of a lover longing for the blissful company of his sweetheart. Thanks. I quote from the poem as under: Make a safe cozy nest, In your heart, on your velvet chest
Very sweet poem, dear Poet Hassan, with a beautiful image too. " Make a safe cozy nest, For my fevered heart and body In your heart, on your velvet chest" .....My favourite verse! Heartiest Congratulations for the POD! You truly deserve it for this rhyming, cute poem....10
Dear Datso Rong As far as I know tongue can be used as a verb too. So here tongue means speak
Well expressed thoughts and feelings. A beautiful creation nicely crafted with insight. Thanks for sharing, Hassan.
I appreciate any encouraging idea. you are very kind to me with this heart warming comment. thanks.
Did he mean heart's tongue? That wouldn't make any sense either!
All you hypocrites who praise junk like this! Like the fourth line of the first stanza: if and if What in the world is THAT supposed to mean?
A deeply emotional and love poem. Very nicely crafted with a smooth flow. 'Today is dark but tomorrow, Lots of suns and stars Will bring the light and sweep the sorrow'... is positive thought. Congrats.
Dear Anil, I appreciate your comment, it is the most encouraging just as usual.
Thirsty dew! ! Muse of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Like drop of thirsty dew in the petals of a red rose. Keep in the arms of you.. Wow! Rich imagery and simily. Congratulations.....10
wow! beautiful! enjoyed it. congratulations for being chosen as the POD! 10++++
Like a drop of thirsty dew, In the petals of a red rose Keep me in the arms of you. a poem full of feelings, suns stars and flowers.. full of perfume. tony
dear Dr. thank you so much for reading my poems. I really feel encouraged seeing your comments.
dear Dr, thank you for your kind comments, thank you for reading my poems. it is very encouraging
Congrats! A well deserved selection. Today is dark but tomorrow, Lots of suns and stars Will bring the light and sweep the sorrow Lovely lines, let us hope the best.
sir Akhtar, I am always humbled for all these attention from you / thanks
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7/29/2025 11:14:54 AM # 1.0.0
Beautifully crafted, an optimistic piece. Enjoyed reading.