Hearts In Two Comments

This poem is full of excellent images and very fine lines Just as the bloom is to the root and the wire to the guitar. The first four lines are very beautiful too and the general sense of the poem. My one reservation is that, occasionally your rhythms go a bit off key. If you don't already do so, read your poems out loud several times. I'm only talking of small adjustments, maybe a syllable less or more in a few lines. I hope you don't mind me saying this, Emily. You have loads of talent. Tom Billsborough