Saturday, April 11, 2020

Hearts In Concentric Circles Comments

Rating: 4.6

The trance-tunnel of hearts
in the concentric circles of love:
hypnotic focal-point of
pulsation…trepidation
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Mahtab Bangalee 26 July 2020

encircled infinity…eternity… the lovers vibrate in the tunnel-vision of their love; peripheral ignorance—heart of love is encircled in the desired center point of life....

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Soran M. H 25 July 2020

This symbolic surreal poetry reminds us with the different times of love, then we enter the door of philosophy and ontology, this poetry with such precision and depth can only be written by an experienced poet with extensive talent and knowledge, well done 10/10 and it goes onto my fav list keep writing stay blessed Excellent

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Soran M. H 25 July 2020

bridal veils, and laptuous babies, in the durable diamond-wedding-rings of encircled infinity…eternity…

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Soran M. H 25 July 2020

the lovers vibrate in the tunnel-vision of their love; peripheral ignorance—

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Khairul Ahsan 24 April 2020

The poem's title is beautiful and appropriate, and the poem starts with some beautiful lines too. Pray, what is the meaning of 'laptuous'?

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 April 2020

A well penned poem. Simply fantastic.....10++++

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