Tuesday, November 3, 2009

Hearts Corner Comments

Rating: 5.0

In my dark little room
Somewhere in the corner
In the dim lamp light
I saw one small object
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Eyan Desir 04 November 2009

I liked the way the words feel out of my mouth good flow well written

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Anju Addanki 04 November 2009

A very good write with lovely wordings.

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rago rago 03 November 2009

very very provocative write and to find the torn heart in the corner the poem goes beyond the limit of appreciation............

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Catrina Heart 03 November 2009

such a great evocative piece.......love it's narration...well told! ! !

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Louis Rams 03 November 2009

as the hands changed, so did the heart gr88888t write a ten

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Janell Cressman 03 November 2009

really good, poem, i liked it! ! ! !

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Rajaram Ramachandran 03 November 2009

The tale of a heart that is as old as an old text book has been nicely revealed.

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Marieta Maglas 03 November 2009

nice meditative narrative poem, lovely rhymes..10+++++++

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Joseph Poewhit 03 November 2009

The past does joggle the heart

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