In my dark little room
Somewhere in the corner
In the dim lamp light
I saw one small object
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very very provocative write and to find the torn heart in the corner the poem goes beyond the limit of appreciation............
such a great evocative piece.......love it's narration...well told! ! !
The tale of a heart that is as old as an old text book has been nicely revealed.
I liked the way the words feel out of my mouth good flow well written