Wednesday, May 27, 2009

Hearts` Beats... Comments

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Hearts` beats...
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hazem al jaber
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Alison Cassidy 29 May 2009

The first stanza would make a poem by itself - 'travel through your whispers', 'closer to your soul than yourself'. You are the Romeo of PoemHunter, Hazem. We readers must all pretend to be your Juliet. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Karla Bardanza 27 May 2009

Lovely poem! Deep and meaningful lines!

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Danny H 27 May 2009

This was very beautfiul, a reconition of your soul in another: ] Keep making Poetry hope your, girlfrrend/wife loves an deserves it 10+

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wonderful true feeling deeply and beautifully said..10++++

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Catrina Heart 27 May 2009

hand by hand, never to be apart... soul by soul, creates a great love... travelling through the heart beats and says the words of love............... romantic as you always penned........10+++++++

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