Hearts Are Gods Comments
Hearts are gods just always beaten,
Yet still you leave me so defeated,
How hard is it to be-just me breathing,
My lungs ignore air and go on screaming,
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No one stays unbeloved........... even the hunchback of Notre Damme was beloved once... Nice poem, full of emotions, with little work on words (and some spelling) and divisions, I believe, it would be sculptured complete. Keep on going!
OOPSS. FOR STARTERS I LOVED THE TITLE OF UR POEM...LOTS OF EMOTIONS PORTRAYED HERE WITH HONESTY AND SINCERITY... POETRY IS THERAPY AFTER ALL... KEEP WRITING...GOD BLESS U
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7/29/2025 12:05:37 PM # 1.0.0
Hey hate to say this bub but i were should be we're: -P otherwise this is really lovely i love the rhythm and rhyme