Sunday, September 25, 2016

Hearts Comments

Rating: 5.0

On a cold and windy day. Oh, how I love to watch the trees sway.
With not a single soul around, love to listen to the sound...As
the wind whisps the leaves across the ground...I began to slowly drift away, when I heard something make me stop and stay.
Off in a distance but not to far..a chord, a string and a few
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Rebecca Navarre
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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 March 2022

Starting off gentle, soft and slow. Then stronger and louder it began to grow. Note by note, key by key.....beautiful expression. Loved this wonderful poem.5 stars.

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Jeanette Telusma 26 October 2017

- - Steadfast and constant it came to me. It caught me hard and struck so deep.- - Between these lines lies the connection of love, music and life. Lovely poem in it's entirety.

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Rebecca Navarre 29 October 2017

Thank You! ! ! Jeanette, For Such A Beautifully Kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poems Are Oh, So Beautiful To Read! ! ! ! ! Touching Life, Nature, And God, With The Words You Sow And Speak! ! ! ! ! :) Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Sandra Feldman 29 September 2016

The feelings in this poem find, The way to reach The reader's heart and mind, Pleasantly, present you find a way To make them well and vividly stay. Great poem, we participate and flow with it. Very nicely done.

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Rebecca Navarre 05 November 2016

Thank You! So Much Sandra, So Dearly Love Your Writings! Sorry so late to respond missed a few.. Many, Many, Blessings! ! !

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