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earth is almost in the dark even with this apparent light... a realization that almost all poets make you have written down Shirin thank you

nice message! i like it! ! dramatically well-written!

'apparent light '______very symbolic. Real poetic.Thanks.++10.

beautiful write.wordplay and flow is nice.liked it.

but at every single moment of time earth seems illuminated by some spectacular hearts liked these lines dear Shirin.... you are poetic. lot of good ideas in ur poem. thank you for sharing.

That was a well written poem good write

meanwhile nowadays earth is almost in the dark even with this apparent light well written and done in a perfect poetic and melodic way..rich in idea and enough meaningful.. liked the way you wrote..lovely poem and let me say well done..10+++++++

A lovely beginning floowed by the mention of darkness...and really personifying the general mood of the world...so unique in that all cultures seem to agree yet for some reason can not unite in simply living this really brief life out in complete peace and joy...your love of nature also apparent, , , , ,

Yet comes the time When a secluded poet Tears out his aglowing heart For all to show it And it becomes flashlight In darkness chart. Once lit it won’t fade Until new stars facilitate To find escape from Night. 10+

dear shirin, i do share your anxiety.....

My heart is awlays enlightened by the bright side of the earth, the most beautiful home............created by God.

theme of your poem is bitter despite of your name! but i love it! sadly it's real and we must see to it and sherraged! keep on please!

Shirin it really was wonderful, i loved it. i guess u r right earth is dark when u look down but there r still some people that light up the earth with their smile exactly like the stars in the sky.

earth still moves with spectacular heaerts darkness would disappear when brilliant sun would come.....quite evocatively humanistic, well penned,10++++, thanks for sharing

Great exhibition of humanism. Superb read, indeed.

The Poem..Heart with Shirin light. Awesome!

A nice write indeed, as Melvina said. Last two lines are very important to understand the poem. 'Nowadays earth is almost dark' means it was not dark before and it is not compeletly dark. Yet there is some hope. There is still some inside lit apart from this apparent light.

A nice write indeed, I enjoyed the read.

Even though messenger of light- the stars shines in the sky Their light are too feeble to illumine the earthly nights it's dangerous plights. Good Work.

an optimistic perspective of the earth...very much needed in these dismal days!