Saturday, November 24, 2007
Heartless Time Comments
Rating: ★4.1
Time passes by without concern for me.
Each tick rings a tock as it passes free.
Spring rains pass and summer's gone,
Fall and winter just keep moving on.
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Elizabeth Sheaffer
11 December 2007
A lesson I'm still in the process of coping with. Very well-written, with a good rhythm and a great rhyme scheme. Keep up the good work! Warmest Regards, Eliza Stine
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7/25/2025 6:04:39 PM # 1.0.0
Brilliance in composition my friend...woven with fine rhymes...10