Saturday, May 5, 2012

Heartless Comments

Rating: 3.5

You never told me
to take care
because now I see
your heart was never there.
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Daniel Warner
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_unknown_ 26 December 2017

Soo dark nd wonderful The ri8 kind of poem i prefer

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Bella Hernandez 18 December 2012

WOW! a lot of emotion! a feeling that can be related to. you have a great gift! keep it up! keep writing how you feel. that is amazing! (i relate to this poem very much) ~Bella

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Zerozero Fiftyseven 28 November 2012

You put alot of emotionate in it. It's quite amazing. Keep it up.: -)

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Emily Oldham 14 July 2012

Very stark and honest. You really can feel the emotion in this. Thanks for sharing

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Arline Richards 16 May 2012

wow this is dark but i love it

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Lily Dawn 15 May 2012

: o that explains everything! Thank you

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Katherine Bryce 13 May 2012

Wow. I really felt a lot in this poem. I felt your pain. I know where this is coming from. A really powerful piece!

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