Thursday, May 22, 2014

Heartburn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Drops of dew dance down to dawn
Masked moon move merrily to morn
Heart hurts hearing her hasty heartburn
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Leloudia Migdali 03 June 2014

Dense beautiful lines!

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Colleen Courtney 27 May 2014

Such an amazing opening line! Well done!

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