Tuesday, July 31, 2012

Heartburn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fresh tar on the road covers up voices in black
But suggestive words will linger like an attack
The silence like an offering misunderstood
Triggers memories of all that has been good
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Kristina Louisa Carr
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Kelly Seale 02 August 2012

Your words describe this emotion to a t. The heartburn of love, past and present is undaunting and keeps you at odds, off-balance and uneasy... and: unanswered questions remain open floating adrift... Excellent Write! -Kelly.

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Kristina Louisa Carr

Kristina Louisa Carr

Born: Cape Town, South Africa
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