Monday, July 16, 2007

Heartbroken Lover Comments

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Uncharted territories I do explore every night and day,
No dream or hope because my sweet girl has gone away.
I have been misled by my own feelings every second,
That my girl will come back to me, and I will be fecund.
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Nilesh Tavarayan
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Hebert Logerie Sr. 25 May 2009

Please correct this mistake, you meant: 'I have been misled'.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 25 May 2009

This is a lovely poem, I really feel every words of this wonderful way of expressing yourself. Keep it up. HL

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Nilesh Tavarayan

Nilesh Tavarayan

Wattala- Sri Lanka
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