Heartbroken Poem by Rachael Loh Rui Qi

Heartbroken



Crack! What is that sound
That is my heart shattering
silently in pain.

Thursday, May 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbroken
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's my first haiku, I wrote it in school on 25-2-2014.It was preparation for exam, but I just had inspiration and wrote it. Enjoy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 27 May 2014

Hmmm.....I totally love the idea of this but am having a hard time wondering how the sound of a crack can be silent? Kind of like the age old question, if a tree falls in the forest............

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Brian Jani 22 May 2014

Heartbreaks happen once in a while hey

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Rachael Loh Rui Qi

Rachael Loh Rui Qi

Penang, Malaysia
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