Heartbroken Comments

Angie, you are so ahead for your age, fourteen? Unbelievable that you can write like you do.Poetically Precociouss. Keep up the good work, you'll get far.We are so in need of unusual minds in our computerized world today where no one seems to be able to think. Let us all enjoy the precious gifts of poetic thought that you will provide us with. Best of luck, pursue excellence, beauty that's the key and never give up.

Angie, you are so ahead for your age, fourteen? Unbelievable that you can write like you do.Poetically Precociouss. Keep up the good work, you'll get far.We are so in need of unusual minds in our computerized world today where no one seems to be able to think. Let us all enjoy the precious gifts of poetic thought that you will provide us with. Best of luck, pursue excellence, beauty that's the key and never give up.

Swimming in the sea of sadness and bathing in the bath tub of a broken heart. Full of feelings my friend. Thanks for sharing!

Swimming in the sea of sadness and bathing in the bath tub of a broken heart. Full of feelings my friend. Thanks for sharing!

The heart is broken but the mind. Yet it sets him free faking a smile. The truth known only to the two is buried in her broken heart. He may have forgotten his promises but she can't. He is alive in her dreams and wishes for ever. You Angelina, make this old bard to get his eyes wet. Excellent.