I gave you all my love,
You gave me yours
I claimed you mine,
And you claimed me yours
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Marvellous poem written with great skill. Rich in imagery and emotions. I liked and rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 1.
that is so beautiful lili.. u r so young but ur writing is strong.. i liked it.. :)
1 word - Passion...you have a very deep vision towards life and it'll take you a long way.