Sunday, July 10, 2011

Heartbroken Comments

Rating: 5.0

I gave you all my love,
You gave me yours
I claimed you mine,
And you claimed me yours
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Lilith Tuchenhagen
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Chaths Odion 28 July 2011

1 word - Passion...you have a very deep vision towards life and it'll take you a long way.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 10 July 2011

Marvellous poem written with great skill. Rich in imagery and emotions. I liked and rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 1.

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Sidra Naz 10 July 2011

that is so beautiful lili.. u r so young but ur writing is strong.. i liked it.. :)

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Lilith Tuchenhagen

Lilith Tuchenhagen

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