I made a mistake
You offered but I did not take
I left you heartbroken
Unable to heal
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So sad so fluid in the communication of heart break, so good, so much talent, Loved it
I can tell this is written from you're heart. I like the way to save the bigs words for the end. Awesome! !
This poem is just so awsome. I really think you have an amazing talent!