Tuesday, July 28, 2009

Heartbroken Comments

Rating: 5.0

I made a mistake
You offered but I did not take
I left you heartbroken
Unable to heal
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Miranda Van Yperen
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Beatriz Luna 04 September 2009

This poem is just so awsome. I really think you have an amazing talent!

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Anthony Foster 27 August 2009

So sad so fluid in the communication of heart break, so good, so much talent, Loved it

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Brittney Abrams 05 August 2009

absolutely amazing. you have talent: D

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Siddharth Singh 05 August 2009

This is a beautifully written apology. Good work.

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Alice Duong 30 July 2009

i love this poem, ur awesome thanks for sharing

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Darla Holt 29 July 2009

I can tell this is written from you're heart. I like the way to save the bigs words for the end. Awesome! !

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