Monday, October 1, 2012

Heartbroken Comments

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Lost and alone
My world against me
No light in sight
No one to lead me
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Jack Abdallah
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Bartholomew A. B. Sarbah 28 April 2015

hmmmm....its got a whole message to tell...when you love someone very much, you are likely to be affraid of losing her...hmmmm....we can not always help it though, but just wish that they never abandon us....nice writeup....

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Nurain Ali-balogun 01 October 2012

Exceptional, you were able to say much by not saying much. I like the 'your love increasing and hers decreasing' part. Good job

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Jack Abdallah

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