Thursday, October 2, 2008

Heartbroken Comments

Rating: 4.5

Getting your heart broken is like getting shot
But really your heart is getting ripped right out of you.
Sometimes you just want to be alone in your world.
It hurts a lot when it happens
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Sarah Cook
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Asif Andalib 10 October 2008

Dear Sarah It's a reality-oriented good poem. Thanks for sharing. You have got 9 from me so that you try to master the craft of writing since you are so young. But there's one thing I wonder; you wrote: Because knowing that you're know longer with that person. Whether know longer means no longer or not.

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