Tuesday, October 9, 2007

Heartbroken Comments

Rating: 4.1

If a name defines you
Then my name is heartbroken
My heart was shattered
Along time ago
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Carissa McBride
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Blue Eyes 02 December 2008

u have a really nice ability to choose the right words.i love this poem.it is a heartbreaker.i am truly touched.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 November 2008

Emotional outbreak; so wonderfully penned. too good. Read my 'broken heart' You can very well relate to my feelings. Let us share our broken heart feelings

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 10 October 2008

I can see your internal bleeding, but u have to move on.......better is better than good or you'll hit the best.....of the best!

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wow i feel the pain! well written

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hey this is really good and i know how you feel that is a very strong poem.

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helena dombrowski 27 February 2008

hey, this is really deep. i feel like this sometimes. you are a great poet. keep writing

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Malini Kadir 20 February 2008

hope your heart heals soon....and A caring sparrow hopes in to his garden....slipping into his house and tapping on his table to remind.....of a heart he played with and walked on with life.......So that trying to shoo the sparrow...he sit back to lean on his chair to ponder What the little reminiscent thought in passing was making him recollect.......

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Chaotic Life - Curly M. 07 February 2008

awww...sad poem but loved it thanx for reading my poems ill continue reading urs

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Private Griffin 07 December 2007

sweet i think my name would be loser

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Tom Altenhofen 02 November 2007

That is a great way of expressing it. I kinda feel like that most of the time. I can't get over the idea of loosing the best part of my life: (I so frickin' miss her...

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Carissa McBride

Carissa McBride

Toledo Ohio
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