Saturday, March 25, 2023

Heartbreaks Comments

Rating: 5.0

The first one was long and deep
Like a strong earthquake
The waves reaching each cell
Each nook and corner
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Ruta Mohapatra
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Bharati Nayak 26 March 2023

There have been some more After that first heartbreak But one cannot break Something already broken Well, one can, but then The effect will never be the same again--An emotional poem so beautifully inked!

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M. Asim Nehal 26 March 2023

Excellent poem, nicely conceived.

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Nabakishore Dash 26 March 2023

The effect will never be the same again.rightly penned dear poet.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 25 March 2023

Kesev is right and yr poem reflect that Bravo! ! ! !

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"One cannot real/something already broken"… poignant and beautiful, good. Enjoyed.5*

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 March 2023

Beautifully written. Yeah the effects will not be devastating like it was first time. Nicely expressed.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 25 March 2023

Beautiful oxymoron, Ruta. It tells a lot

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