Friday, February 3, 2006

Heartbreak Comments

Rating: ★5.0

The lancet of my inner eye
Has pierced the clot of clouds apart
To reveal in the depths of sky
The globule of my heart.
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Tan Pratonix
scream torn
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Philippa Lane 08 February 2006

I particularly like the third stanza. You are a true poet, with perfect choice of words and phrases. Another really good poem.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 03 February 2006

Heartbreak introduces darkness and that is introduced well. 'Into a lava-throated gull...and spitting fangs of snakes.' UGH! Now, that's a crush well depicted. L

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Triolet, Mauritius
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Triolet, Mauritius
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