Wednesday, November 26, 2008

Heartbreak Hotel Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sit here in a dark
empty room and wait for
you to turn around and
come back into my life.
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Dixon Irene
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Punctuated with pain that that flows from the fountain of a broken heart. Very nice indeed.

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Silence Dogood 26 November 2008

I love the title heartbreak hotel interesting and captures the eye the poem was alright the lines were well written and overall it was well composed with a story and deep emotions

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Dixon Irene

Dixon Irene

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