Heartbreak An Pain Comments

it seems that there is people who always likes to do so, but they will be regretted one day when they will left with heartbreak....what comes around goes around... loved this poem, very well done...10 Hataw

The fist and last lines should be checked for spelling, but otherwise it was a fine write. I still don't like the line splits, but that is a style preference. This is one with a nice flow as well. I liked that. GW62