Heartbreak Comments

Thank you for reading my poem. I loved this..so much emotion. I see a story in my head while I read it. Thank you for sharing!

Ouch, really a heartbreak. Lines are so meant and felt, emotions filled the air. You passed all those to your readers, nice one.

'If my heart would have been page, It would burn to ashes right now, ' Felt the heat of your heart, right at start! 'Why raise them high, feast on my misery, When you knew I couldn’t cope, ' Here, ' feast on my misery' says a lot more than what you've written. 'Didn’t knew you were so cruel, That you enjoyed my heartbreak……….. ' Touched me!

I love this poem, just like my favourite poem CURSED IS LOVE FOR YOUR SAKE its very touching keep it going boss

This piece is kinda other version of my new poem ‘Strange Love‘ and also Dislocated Heart‘s poem, ‘Isnt For Me‘... ^_^

very touching a sad experience. 10

It is poignant and touching. Every single line touches the heart.

Awesome! It's a very nice expression of a heartbreak feeling.remembered me the experience I had.Lucifera! you killed me! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It touches me so much : (.. anyways this is really good to be broken hearted leads us to fight more and continue believing the power of love!

Sad..but, everything happens for a good reason.Perhaps there is someone more deserving for you: -)