Tuesday, August 10, 2010

Heartbreak Comments

Rating: 5.0

Yesterday the love:

My heart rises, your heart falls
Your heart falls, my heart rises
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Alex Medina 03 January 2013

Remember that love does not hurt. Pain does. Although the beginning clouds the reader in darkness, There is a small light at the end. All you need is a small light....

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Christopher Cariad 20 August 2011

Very good poem of a relationship betrayed.

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Kevin Carney 13 August 2010

very good poem of love, love and then betrayal and in the end love still holds true. I can relate to this. Nice write.

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David Beckham

David Beckham

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