I sit on my bed
And I read the same thing over and over.
I read what he wrote when he loved me.
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Love the ending, and the use of the 'dagger' as the weapon. It makes it seem like it took place in a previous century. Haha, and we both used the Embers metaphor :)
its really good, i can believe a 14 year old like you can write this kind of poem keep on rockin........ take care
wow, this is a really good poem and it describes the pain of a real heartbreak. it reminded me a lot of my poem The Last Word. the pain so hard to bear you just give up... this is one of the best poems i have read.