Heartbreak Comments

wow, this is a really good poem and it describes the pain of a real heartbreak. it reminded me a lot of my poem The Last Word. the pain so hard to bear you just give up... this is one of the best poems i have read.

mhmm....another really good one (:

a poem full of wisdom. congrats

Love the ending, and the use of the 'dagger' as the weapon. It makes it seem like it took place in a previous century. Haha, and we both used the Embers metaphor :)

'Death is the answer to love's mysteries'.....sad: (

voted 8/10 Good poem

heh, im 13. but thanks

its really good, i can believe a 14 year old like you can write this kind of poem keep on rockin........ take care

sad but lovely...keep it up