Friday, April 16, 2010

Heartbreak Comments

Rating: 4.4

I sit on my bed
And I read the same thing over and over.
I read what he wrote when he loved me.
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Kylee Bartz
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Cat Windham 21 June 2010

wow, this is a really good poem and it describes the pain of a real heartbreak. it reminded me a lot of my poem The Last Word. the pain so hard to bear you just give up... this is one of the best poems i have read.

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Iron Panda 23™ 12 May 2010

mhmm....another really good one (:

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Abnish Singh Chauahan 11 May 2010

a poem full of wisdom. congrats

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Yoni Assis 11 May 2010

Love the ending, and the use of the 'dagger' as the weapon. It makes it seem like it took place in a previous century. Haha, and we both used the Embers metaphor :)

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Rijad Islamovic 11 May 2010

'Death is the answer to love's mysteries'.....sad: (

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Shady El-shafie 11 May 2010

voted 8/10 Good poem

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KYLEE BARTZ 11 May 2010

heh, im 13. but thanks

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Cheryl Aldea 11 May 2010

its really good, i can believe a 14 year old like you can write this kind of poem keep on rockin........ take care

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Lefix Onyango 10 May 2010

sad but lovely...keep it up

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Kylee Bartz

Kylee Bartz

Attica, New York
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