Heartbreak.
Something I know to much about.
Thinking you would never break my heart.
But sure enough you did with out a doubt.
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loved the simple words you used in this poem. hearbreak are part and parcel of life... Preets
Hey Tiara, that's a really powerful poem, some guys can be real cruel. But Try not 2 think about it, it's his loss. Keep writing, best wishes, from Rissa: -)
The structure was so bear...It kept me wanting more from each stanza. though I typically like more of a complex poem, one that makes me think, this wasn't so bad.