Tuesday, April 25, 2006

Heartbreak Comments

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Heartbreak.
Something I know to much about.
Thinking you would never break my heart.
But sure enough you did with out a doubt.
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Tiara Neal
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Joseph Harskamp 17 September 2006

The structure was so bear...It kept me wanting more from each stanza. though I typically like more of a complex poem, one that makes me think, this wasn't so bad.

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Preeti - is here! 16 May 2006

loved the simple words you used in this poem. hearbreak are part and parcel of life... Preets

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Hey Tiara, that's a really powerful poem, some guys can be real cruel. But Try not 2 think about it, it's his loss. Keep writing, best wishes, from Rissa: -)

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Tiara Neal

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