Wednesday, January 2, 2013

Heartbreak - 2 Comments

Rating: 4.1

Find an audience and reach out to relevance
Narrate the plight, the agony, the road blocks
Share the disappointment and let-out the ills and worms
Let-out, no-good-thoughts that sends your head to free fall
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David Beckham
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Theresa Peters 05 January 2013

this is a very deep poem... heartfelt

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Dawn Lambert 03 January 2013

heart broken is the most kind of destruction you can have the mirror reflects it all the only thing that will be true

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Poetheart Morgan 03 January 2013

The mirror has several meanings. self contemplation, reflection, Narcissism. For me the best translation is Oscar Wilde. Very good your poem. reminded me of The Picture of Dorian Gray.

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Hazel Durham 03 January 2013

Such raw honesty written with such passion for life with all it's faults, you deliver a great message that none of us can be perfect but we can try to be good decent people! ! Great write! !

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Scarlett Cleo Nightingale 02 January 2013

Vevery vivid.... Complicated but totally relatable... I love the poem! It decribes the feeling perfectly..

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