Sunday, May 17, 2015

Heartbreak Comments

Rating: 3.5

It aches..it shakes..it makes me feel
It hurts..it burns & makes me squeal
So easy to lie, so easy to fake?
tears are nothing to those stories ul make
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It aches..it shakes..it makes me feel It hurts..it burns & makes me squeal Good depiction about heartbreaks of love

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Good depiction about heartbreaks of love

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Chinedu Dike 17 May 2015

The pains of heartbreak well depicted in the poem. A good piece of poetry nicely penned with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕9

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Kelly Kurt 17 May 2015

Interesting style and pure content. Thanks for sharing

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