What words to say
What verses to write
when watching the earthquake
and tsunami, casting their fury
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Elizabeth, your use of methaphors are unparalled. This poem brings to fore the vagaries of mankind not only in Japan but other parts of the world. You have a special ways of using questions to drive home your message. Another strong point is always the last part of your poems, very philosophical. Keep scribling.
Thanks, dear poet, for your comment which is very encouraging. The great calamity which hit Japan last year left us to grasp the philosophical realities in life. We do hope that Japan has now managed to be relieved from that unspeakable tragedy.