Heartbeat Comments

You have speculated the oneness of universe through love which relates to peace and heartbeat. The way of presentation is unique and amazing. I quote..... Our breathes... Pace beats.. With love.. Be One.. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

Amazing Beautiful Poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! Striking! ! ! ! ! Beauty, Love, Peace, Heart Beats! ! ! ! ! ! Excellent Beat And Tone! ! ! ! ! With Heart And Wisdom Shown! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! + Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

a lovely rhythmic poem that should join with every living heartbeat? .........superbly written US.

Pounding and haunting! Nice piece of work.

Such poetic passion! Could not help but thoroughly enjoy this clever, original piece.

Like it my friend. Very good. Do you sing it, have you Sung it.? And yes my sands of time poem is the One i told you about.

Love is beautiful, and fantastically expressed in this poem. I love your vision of love, haha, great writing once more here.

Very beautiful. Made it very soothing with the effects, rhymes, narration technique and deep love for humanity.Moreover heartbeat is a life activity. Life process is fused with great feelings. I give full 10 marks. :)

I Being honored by another two precious gems, but the comments have been deleted by the system so i 'eternalize' that shiny comments to keep bouncing light in heartbeat frame :) Rekha Mandagere- Tq for her ruby shine by sending me: You are wonderfully creating the concept of LOVE in the mind of readers. I saw Alfred Tennyson''S movement in your poetry! Great. Terence George Craddock, I enjoyed your emerald green poem :) he wrote me 'Dance Freedom In Every Heartbeat', if u like to read it, can check in his page -Unwritten Soul

Fantastic idea of attaining the peaceful oneness of the universe. Good poem. Beautifully explained the necessity of breathing exploiting the nature and earth everytime but behaving callously to deny others existence. A song indeed. Remind me a musical composition of Pink Floyd who once experimented simply with such sounds of heart not any word was there. Thank you poet for sharing such writing with the readers. Regards, pranab 10+++(if machine acts properly)

Dance beautiful soul, the more you dance the closer we all are. A free lance dancer never tunes the puppets. Freedom's in your head with love and peace in a free verse :)

I am so sorry for Rekha and Terence about the missing of your comment (which i dont know how it did happened) , gladly the messages for this poem was sent to me earlier in my Yahoo mail. As a mark of appreciating your effort of time and energy so i restore the comment back, thank you for both of you...With warm heartbeat smiles :) ...sorry and i have no idea why this happen, not the 1st time... Comment: Rekha Sathya: You are wonderfully creating the concept of LOVE in the mind of readers. I saw Alfred Tennyson''S movement in your poetry! Great. Terence George Cradock: He left a comment as you can read his poem entitiled: Dance Freedom In Every Heartbeat Copyright © Terence George Craddock Thanks for nice word and they were too big for me..much smile in heartbeat :)

A send of Love in any way for anyone cannot do any bad. I think that love might be the best energy in the world! But we understand and have it only as a treat. We forget that we need to produce the energy in order to consume it..maybe that is why most people are starving for love... we can survive with very little of it.. If we could die of love starve, Earth would have no humans habitation..So please allow me to feel this lovely poem, to squeeze its energy, feed to myself a dropp of it then send all love again to others.For a better world may all hearts sing your songs of love! Thank you for share 10

'I burst it out tonight Only tell it loud and i cant hide Faster, pounding and haunting Stand for love tonight, pace won't stop Don't you listen the beats from me? Nation of love, vibration to get free.. Kill the love, then the heartbeat stop Be United as one Breathe.Beat.Love.Free.Us' Dance Freedom In Every Heartbeat if we cannot dance with love and freedom in our hearts for all then we cannot hear the rhythm of love written into all beauty that remains in our heart beat world that remains in beautiful gentle souls that remains in gift love softly sung that remains in God’s original gift vision for created humanity all souls dancing to sacred rhythm life are previous unique hearts bliss wonder all dancers smile laugh breathe love Inspired by the poem ‘Heartbeat’ by Unwritten Soul. Copyright © Terence George Craddock

You are wonderfully creating the concept of LOVE in the mind of readers. I saw Alfred Tennyson'S movement in your poetry! Great.

What a intersting and fantastic poem. I love the way you have incorporate the diffrrent languages to make it a universal poem of understanding. Your love for mankind is well welll expressed. You have written a poem that should be shared with everyone in the world. Great thought and borders on a song. Great job Soul :) :)