Sunday, November 20, 2011

Heartbeat Comments

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Gentle is the heartbeat I've never known,
humming in sync with the Crimson that flows,
The sweetest lullaby, the envy of all melodies,
Such a faint whisper, Only I am able to hear,
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Crimson Love
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Harindhar Reddy 21 November 2011

'falls into regret, the beating shall stop, love is beautiful..... but what it does is not.' I am touched by your poem. I think this poem has the depth of the Indian Ocean. I am Proud of your work being a fellow poet! Carry with your poetry in the same passion and style. A garland to you (if only you write many poems like this) ...Ha! HA! Ha! :) :) :)

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Dave Walker 20 November 2011

Really like this. Really good poem.

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