Wednesday, February 4, 2009

Heartbeat Comments

Rating: 5.0

heart...well is beating
it only appoints the clock tact
of passing moments
of hours caught into the trap
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Maria Barbara Korynt
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ur heart shall beat on for all eternity thru this poem..magnificent write

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Dagmara Anna 19 February 2009

In a word - marvellous! ! ! It is worthwhile reading.

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Hazem Al Jaber 11 February 2009

heart beats.. mind works as well, , just when we are in love.. that love which makes a hearts beats so fast however we thought about that whom we love.. i can feel your hears` beats.. thanks sweet poet.. hazem al..

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Catrina Heart 06 February 2009

Beautiful poem crafting with a query for us to think about...10

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Muhammad Ali 05 February 2009

nice. when you ar emotionless you are true to all emotions. nicely written

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