''heartbeat'' Comments

The affection between mother and child is beautifully presented. The child feels totally secure in mother's arms.

Beautiful poem. Well written. The secure feelings we get when we hear a heartbeat.

Like music with a steady beat Safe and secure on a soft seat Soothing sounds tickled the ears Taking away all of life's fears A poem with soft and sweet motherly touch. A resonance of heart beat, Mother is heart and child is beat. I enjoyed it Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

A very sweet poem on a mother and her baby! A baby finds comfort in its mother's lap and is sheltered from all dangers! As long as it is in the protective embrace of its mother, its mind is free of all fears and soon falls to sleep! Enjoyed this sweetly rhyming poem!

A very sweet poem detailing the beautiful relation between the affectionate mother and the lovely little baby. Such a nice bonding almost heavenly ! ! ! Reminds again every body of their childhood.

This is a real lovely and well written poem, an enjoyable reading, thanks for sharing, Patricia!

An angel sent from above, as a little baby creeps in to mother's lap. Beautiful poem where personal feelings are expressed well. Ever outstanding.

This is exactly a love poem, when a baby comes, A new heartbeat we take care particularly mother the truelove can be seen on the face of mother a reflection of love from baby beautifully decorated - Patricia