Tuesday, August 25, 2015

Heartaches Will Never Last Comments

Rating: 4.8

Heartaches will never last nor will they ever stay;
sorrow shall go so fast in the passing of day.
Once in a little while, one's heart may break and bleed;
abandoned by the smile, his teardrops want to plead.
...
Read full text

Bernard F. Asuncion
COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike 01 April 2025

A masterful poetic design.

0 0 Reply

I feel each word and I feel this poems is for me

1 0 Reply
Putri Misnia Shary Bahri 17 April 2024

Meaningful poek

1 0 Reply
Dr Dillip K Swain 06 October 2023

This wonderful poem carries great impact. Brilliantly penned

2 0 Reply
Uche Nwanze 16 July 2023

'nobody else can cure your wound but you alone'. This piece is a Masterpiece and deserving of a five star. Your poems are out of this world

2 0 Reply
Dr Dillip K Swain 20 September 2022

Nobody else can cure your wound but you alone; self-confidence for sure takes you from your cry zone....heart touching expression. A timeless composition dear poet....great! !

3 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 22 August 2022

The pain and hopelessness are just in someone's mind; causing some mental stress, better leave them behind.....well said. beautiful poem. five stars.

1 0 Reply
Tamara Beryl Latham 25 March 2022

Your words are surely felt by the readers. : -)

1 0 Reply
Kim Barney 03 March 2022

How nice that heartaches don't last. Enjoyed this five-star poem.

1 0 Reply
Aarzoo Mehek 15 December 2021

No one else can cure But you and yourself alone; Fervent devotional prayers Take you away from cry zone......This said it all. May we all heal and move ahead in life. Very touchy poem

1 0 Reply
Nabakishore Dash 10 September 2021

An excellent poem that depicts that nothing is permanent, even not troubles.true thoughts.

1 0 Reply
Aqua Flower 24 August 2021

Wonderful! So true.

0 0 Reply
Richard Wlodarski 02 March 2021

Forgiveness, with God's help, is the only way to forget about the past. And journey forward on this awesome adventure. A joyfully optimistic poem, padre!

0 0 Reply
Susan Williams 06 January 2021

an optimistic write! Sorrow should not dominate a person forever--the day does come that peace fills the heart more and more. Good write, my friend

1 0 Reply
Kesav Easwaran 11 December 2020

Faith leads optimism to success and peace. Good poem having a vision inside.5 stars

0 0 Reply
Khairul Ahsan 10 December 2020

'Sorrow shall be replaced By delight each passing day' - a phenomenal inspiration. These two lines can console any gloomy heart.

1 0 Reply
Mohabeer Beeharry 24 November 2020

I love this write. It is so full of faith, and determination. There is optimism here and hope for better days. Who can understand what life is. Looking at it at its surface value, it wouldd seem to Belize a field of tears and tears. I have stopped to bother, come what may. God bless you. Keep writing. Mohabeer Beeharry

1 0 Reply
Clyde King 22 November 2020

Hi Bernard, thank you for reading. About heartaches, see my poems “For My Beloved Jeanne” and Bible based themes “Where is My Lord? ” Your “Heartaches Will Never Last” is uplifting to me.

1 0 Reply
Ashraf Kallod 21 November 2020

Very nice creation.real truth of life.lot of thanks.

1 0 Reply
John Prophet 12 November 2020

Very nice and very true.

1 0 Reply
Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
Close
Error Success