Sunday, November 3, 2013

Heartache Of Time Comments

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Tomorrows day is planned. All mapped out
What lies ahead, I will be exhausted no doubt
Just what lies ahead for us all each day
Is not always good, we all sometimes see grey
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Lyn Paul
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Annette Aitken 21 August 2016

so I am not facing death, nor have my loved ones died But the heartache is there and I have cried Such powerful words, with great meaning. Annette

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Rubab Atwal 06 December 2013

very inspiring poem, pretty philosphical

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Valsa George 17 November 2013

There will be heart aches in life! That's inevitable! How we face them is more important! If today is not bright, hope that tomorrow will be better! Nice poem with a great philosophy!

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Kavya . 13 November 2013

a nice write on how to enjoy Life today and stop worrying about tomorrow

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David Wood 09 November 2013

Time is a great healer. We have to give the heart time to heal the wounds of today.

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Kanav Justa 08 November 2013

There are poems after reading them we can clearly feel the positive vibes... It was one of those poems... very positive... loved it

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Danny Draper 05 November 2013

Never give up, that is black and white. A very positive poem and affirmation of life and its fragile brevity. A great role of the poet is to honour the dead and celebrate the living, well done in this piece.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 04 November 2013

it can pain a little, but us it can't break we know to live with, always some heartache! very inspiring poem, Lyn. Much loved it.

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Dee Corpolongo 03 November 2013

Excellent point made in this well written poem! Life is complete with all it's ups and downs, leaving some of us smilin', and many with frowns.....but remember we gotta take the good with the bad, and recalling good memories with the times we have had. Thank you Lyn, for your words.

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