Sunday, July 26, 2009

Heartache Comments

Rating: 1.5

the oyster does not know
she holds a pearl in her,
as the rose, does not realise
she is in a bed of thorns!
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Raj Nandy 07 August 2009

Ritty since the comments say that the poem is a nice one, - then which miser has rated it as 3? ! 10! For your poem from me! -Raj

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Rakesh Bedi 27 July 2009

A nice one, ritty, especially the opening stanzas!

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