Heartache Comments

Yes, this is deep and the imagery is sublime. Read mine - How Long is Forever - Adeline

Dusty paper turn to shiny Golden paper when you write :) oh this writer will accumulate talent to be bigger and bigger..nice write Stephanie.. :) keep change all the papers to turn gold okay? :) _Unwritten Soul

a write with depth...touching... wonderful imagery.. creates a picture of life in reality... thanks for sharing your great talent...

Really liked this. A great poem. Fantastic write.

Lie to yourself, cry to yourself, and forget that Any touch of another, reminds you of silver.. This line outstanding, i love the setting..

Yes, that's heartache. It made my own heart ache with the way you explained it...beautifully captured..

You have noe techniqually ascended to the the heady waters of 'Imagery.' No douby about it.