Heartache Comments

an interesting captivating title and the rest is even better great job really well done

Well Baby Blue: After reading your poem , that's just where you put me. I hate to read of such things as this. I always wanted to have a little girl to love, but I have never had any children. Yet this man has you and look at what happens. Thank God you found someone who loves you like I would have my little girl. As those who know me will tell you, I don't really consider this poetry but I consider it prose. But it's good prose, and that's what counts. Very moving , and very satisfying at the end. Hope , should be the last word ever written in all things . Greenwolfe 1962