Monday, March 31, 2014

Heartace Comments

Rating: 5.0

So much pain in my heart
My soul crying out for help every night
Every day is a struggle of survival
With every passing day my strength dies
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Alyona Korovnik
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Dr Antony Theodore 29 August 2020

No longer do I smile for everyone Knowing people think the worst Cheer I no longer desire Knowing I can’t give in But no longer believing in myself. Heartache and betryal. painful experiences that make us negative and take our smile away. never succom to such experiences pray and work hard. you are going to win. tony

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Chinedu Dike 09 February 2018

A sad tale of heartache expertly narrated from inner recesses of the heart. Well expressed thoughts and feelin. Thanks for sharing Aly. Please have a look at my poem COLOSSAL MISCARRIAGE OF JUSTICE (The execution of Christ)

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Alyona Korovnik 08 July 2015

Roseann Shawiak and Tiku thank you so much for your prospective of my poem... Means a lot hearing kind words [3 May God Bless you with all your hearts desires.. Sending you both much love and happiness xoxoxoxoxoxo

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 July 2015

Dark poetry.Please keep your hope alive for a happy time.Be positive.Nice write.

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Roseann Shawiak 29 October 2014

A very tender, heart wrenching poem, Aly. You have definitely written every aspect of it - the love, heartache, betrayal, loss. How do you love life after all that pain? I have no idea, it would be very difficult for me, I know. Love your very honest and truthful portrayal of the struggle of life with no one to reach out to. Thank you. RoseAnn

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