Tuesday, March 31, 2009

Heart With Limited Beats Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our hearts have limited beats.
Every Minute, is one beat less.
One beat less is a second less of life.
Before those limited beats end,
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Rosalita Fern
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Kesav Easwaran 26 May 2009

Good inspirational write, Rosalita...'to live your life to love your life' is indeed a good message to give...refreshing pleasing poem...10

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~ Jon London ~ 11 April 2009

Nicely done my friend, these fizzy lines bubble with talent 10+

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Laurie Hill 11 April 2009

I like this very much

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Dr Kamran Haider 10 April 2009

Here comes another brilliant piece by you... Again I admire this work of yours as I do feel like that... But I would add that our hearts can beat beyond limits, it is only us, the so called modren people of this era; who are afraid of getting a heart attack... :) So we ourselevs are narrowing our fields of vision... An isightful poem... Well penned... Regards, Kamran

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Anita Wisniewska 07 April 2009

timely reminder of what's important - well done

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Ency Bearis 05 April 2009

a very nice self contemplation of life..exrpressed well..great write indeed...10

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