Sunday, August 20, 2017

Heart Vs Mind Comments

Rating: 4.8

I am confused really confused
My mind says to fight for truth
And Heart says to live in harmony
The Mind sets boundaries and limitations
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It's really a tie between soul and sense

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 January 2021

A wonderful poem with deep insight. Beautiful thoughts to ponder about.

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Varsha M 20 January 2021

This is never-ending fight. You need to be wise where to follow heart and where yo mind... good thoughtful poetry.

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Hannington Mumo 02 November 2020

An outstandingly didactic piece on a largely elusive philosophical discourse - heart versus mind...well, this is my take: emotions appeal to the heart and filtered facts, the mind. Following the heart risks deluging sacred truths into ceaseless Waters of sheer impetuous instincts. But, obeying the always far soberer brain's censures leads to less appealing steps that prove more accurate outcomes in the end!

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Chinedu Dike 06 August 2019

Really a poignant rendition nicely crafted in persuasive expressions with conviction. An insightful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Rini.

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Indira Renganathan 19 June 2018

very meaningful...you asked, you answered...very enjoyable, my heart says....kudos Rini ++10

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Ramesh Rai 01 June 2018

WOW. Excellent write. Relation between heart and mind is beautifully written. Cordially invite you to read my poem Heart and Mind. Thanks for sharing. Regards.

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Rajkamal P.j 30 April 2018

mind is materialistic while heart is spiritual i think. well written poem..congrats

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Robert Murray Smith 14 April 2018

Yes, this is another poem of great thoughts.

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Rini Shibu 15 April 2018

Thanks for your compliments..! ! Rini

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 April 2018

My mind says to fight for truth And Heart says to live in harmony The Mind sets boundaries and limitations Heart says love unconditionally Should I listen to my heart or mind? ...........nice presentation in a contradiction manner with introgation mark. Beautiful poem.

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Rini Shibu 01 April 2018

Thank you so much for visiting this poem and posting your comment..

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Sandra Feldman 31 March 2018

Quite a problem for us all, Who to listen to, obey The mind's reason Or heart's, say. Very well presented poem, reaches out and with us stays. Thanks, Rini

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Rini Shibu 01 April 2018

Thank you so much Sandra..! ! Rini

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Deep Paul 31 March 2018

Should I listen to my heart or mind? ..very well written about dilemma in life.

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Rini Shibu 31 March 2018

Thanks Deep Paul..! !

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Deep Paul 31 March 2018

Should I listen to my heart or mind? Very nice thinking of dilemma in life..

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 March 2018

Wow Rini! It's a brilliant piece of work! I am very late to read this wonderful piece of poetry! Your expression is sparkling! I quote, 'If it is from my mind/Then why do my heart ache and rejoice in love/Is it not the first electromagnetic wave/started from the heart' I vote it with a 10 (I will read it as and when I am free)

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thanks Dillip K..! !

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Walterrean Salley 01 March 2018

A common struggle that many have in life. Finding one's way through the maze is not easy, but one must keep trying.

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Rini Shibu 01 March 2018

Thanks for your comment..***

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Chuy Amante 29 January 2018

live from the heart let go of mind you'll always be well and never be blind

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Rini Shibu 29 January 2018

Thanks Marvel! ! !

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Bipasha D 14 January 2018

This poem captured my heart Rini :)

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Rini Shibu 15 January 2018

Thank you so much Bipasha for visiting this poem

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 28 November 2017

there was no brain That's the reason my mind follows my this line is so beautiful thanks for shearing poem10++++++++

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Rini Shibu 28 November 2017

Thanks for reading this poem and commenting

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 October 2017

Is it not my heart acted as mind when there was no brain........ Most humans still don't know....the heart and brain are totally independent...the brain does control all organs except the heart... it does not dictate when to start nor where to blood deport...nor does the heart have to listen ...it maintains it's own vision...where much and how much blood to send... and where ...so mind is of natural deport it's cage lies in the brain... heart a loner as ever always does remain...when it can no longer sustain... it silently does sly away..and brain also has to give way... so brain is dependent on a heart in a way... for blood to nourish the outer- skirts...which also die alas...sadly in vain...as in veins

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Rini Shibu 24 October 2017

Good attempt.. Thanks for reading

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Sochukwu Ivye 16 October 2017

I love the poetic juxtaposition of both vital organs of life. Brilliant of you, dear.

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Rini Shibu 16 October 2017

Thanks for the comment chukwuma

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