Friday, May 25, 2012

Heart That Rots... Comments

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Stuck between the frames and the doors,
Stuck between the frames and the windows,
Stuck those lizards to die and decompose,
Sometimes not even noticed,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Rajendran Muthiah 25 May 2012

Wonderful. 'stuck between', 'not even', sometimes not even'...these rhetorical features make the rhythm running till the end. The central idea is unique. You look at things in a poetic attitude.

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Wahab Abdul 25 May 2012

really good one, the poem is full of nice words and wisdom.

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