Sunday, July 30, 2006

Heart Surgery Comments

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The doctors say it's broken
and they can't operate.
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Preeti - is here! 10 August 2006

Oh..that was very unique concept to write a heartbreak poem....kudos to the creativity. but don't give up..just a few days and the heart will be whole again! .. - YOU CAN MAKE IT WHOLE AGAIN! ! Preets

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Dee Daffodil 07 August 2006

Hey! It might be broken into a zillion little pieces...but it's still yours...and ya know what...I've heard that if you nurture it and care for it and treat it with respect...that you can...in fact...make it whole again... I love the concept of the poem and the imagery was awesome! Hugs, Dee

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Austen Bradford 30 July 2006

I like the concept, interesting, but yes slighting dripping with Emo.

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