Tuesday, February 10, 2009

Heart Sounds Comments

Rating: 3.4

Restless are the ocean waves
that battle for the land.
Their struggles are so timeless
against the grains of sand.
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Terry Finch
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Romeo Della Valle 16 September 2011

Impressive! You clearly show in this well penned and beautiful write! Your great poetic talent is strongly shown in it! 10+++ Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Duh Huh 22 February 2009

Poignant and beautiful. There is an underlying sadness in the beauty of the verse. Another poem read that teaches a new view at life. Thank you.

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Terry Finch

Terry Finch

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