Heart Song Comments

This poem is really cool cuz I had never thought about the heart like this before and it really made me think about my heart. It's really cool when you think about it through your perspective.

A rhythmic drum, keeping us alive with so many beats in a lifetime, a different tune for each emotion, i like it

Wow, if that doesn't paint a mental picture I don't know what does. I like the 'Pushing the sticky liquid through its viens'. A nice poem about a heart.