Thursday, July 29, 2010

*heart Solitude* Comments

Rating: 2.9

I'to pass alone the cold night without tears*
Attempt for standing without love and try the feeling heart solitude*
I'passed my long night without word's*
without power*
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 August 2010

‘Hoped received the warm hug* Waiting the holy kiss*’ ~ Here swing of emotion…lovely… ‘I'planted my longing too much in grounds my heart, and only will become wound in my heart**’ ~ Here de=swing of emotion…it is called poetic twist and you’ve carried me till last two lines…deluge of emotion…excellent from heart in solitude the womb of poetry… thanks sharing… Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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